Well done! Both very hot, especially the first one. I was not familiar with that ee cummings poem, it is really sexy! I loved them quoting poetry at each other, getting each other all riled up! And the description of Sirius's hands was delish. I just wish you hadn't stopped when class was over!
I agree with an earlier comment about the bondage one, that these two have been through so much trauma that they need to keep it light when they're together. But I did like how Remus took charge, both in the way he withheld and then pounced on Sirius, and in that he took good care of him and stopped when he sensed it was too overwhelming. Again, I would have liked to have a more detailed description of the final rolling in the sheets scene that you hinted at.
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Date: 2009-04-29 11:32 pm (UTC)I agree with an earlier comment about the bondage one, that these two have been through so much trauma that they need to keep it light when they're together. But I did like how Remus took charge, both in the way he withheld and then pounced on Sirius, and in that he took good care of him and stopped when he sensed it was too overwhelming. Again, I would have liked to have a more detailed description of the final rolling in the sheets scene that you hinted at.
Lovely, do more!