Ah, yes, the fade-outs are all due to my own hesistancies and insecurities; I'm still not a 100% comfortable with writing smut, so I'm a bit of a cop-out at the moment. Hopefully this will go away in time. *g*
But I did like how Remus took charge, both in the way he withheld and then pounced on Sirius, and in that he took good care of him and stopped when he sensed it was too overwhelming.
That was exactly what I wanted to convey. ♥ I'm one of those who prefer Remus being the "dominant" partner of their relationship, and that mostly because I see him being "better" at taking care of Sirius than the other way around. Not saying that Sirius doesn't take care of those he love, but with his upbringing, the "mollycoddling" probably wouldn't come as naturally to him. (Gods, the boys are so screwed-up and broken.)
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Date: 2009-04-30 02:57 pm (UTC)Ah, yes, the fade-outs are all due to my own hesistancies and insecurities; I'm still not a 100% comfortable with writing smut, so I'm a bit of a cop-out at the moment. Hopefully this will go away in time. *g*
But I did like how Remus took charge, both in the way he withheld and then pounced on Sirius, and in that he took good care of him and stopped when he sensed it was too overwhelming.
That was exactly what I wanted to convey. ♥ I'm one of those who prefer Remus being the "dominant" partner of their relationship, and that mostly because I see him being "better" at taking care of Sirius than the other way around. Not saying that Sirius doesn't take care of those he love, but with his upbringing, the "mollycoddling" probably wouldn't come as naturally to him. (Gods, the boys are so screwed-up and broken.)